Ideal Helmet??

[Motoworld]

Hi everyone,

 

We would like to do a poll on the criteria that you would set when getting a Full Face Helmet. Please input your views for this topic, thank you!

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I prefer comfort, Interior can be remove for wash

[Guest lovefcs09]

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